This morning R14 had a short writing session where they focused on using powerful language and writing in complete sentences that use commas. Please leave a comment below as feedback.
Simone
Split apart for eternity, a punishment from the Gods. Longing for some company, she turned to her love.
Maddox
Mountains and rivers join forces, hoping there is more out there to see.
Max
Oceans rage in fear, each one with abandoned souls. Lightning thumps on the sea's surface.
Sam
As wrath joins together creating everything. Destroying life, opening death.
Leroy
People get a new life, leaving what once was death and despair, life of evil. Now stand in the battlefield of peace, a reminder of the past.
Chloe
As they whisper, shadows appear creating a new path. They join thoughts and link minds.
Isla
A raging jewel of waves crash through an abyss of anger and hate, dragging happiness into a prison of despair. Magnifying life's purpose. Death...
Samuel
Storm. Nothing can break it, it hits with power and will not stop until the enemy is dead.
Quinn
As a tranquil scene turns vicious, the blue sky disappears, taking the sun with it.
Teagan
The empty souls caress the waves, as all life falls below.
Daria
Waves crash in the unforgiving winds, the sun is too scared to come out from its hiding place. The most miserable shade of grey, every little creature safe, hiding away in its home, not daring to come out.
Joseph
The waves clash, hoping to steal the light, and feed it to the earth's soul. Clouds loomed overhead, eating up the sky. The waves grew angry, ricochetting off each other, and then, there was silence.
Fin
It was a dark, gloomy night with the waves destroying anything in its path, like a hurricane.
Arya
They begin to fight, death looming between them, waiting to strike. Their essence of life fades away as their souls perish, giving up all hope.
Louis
A feisty gust of wind carries the waves frantically, expressing the dark clouds.
Hugo
The wrath of time. Death lies here, hope does too, one ray of light descends, it shall be, it will be, it can be, and nothing shall stop it, not even the anger of mankind.
Rosa
In an enchanted wood, a solitary tree sits lost in time. Its visions of the treacherous past surround it. In the heart of this oak, lies secrecy and greed.
Greer
I start to feel calmer, I fall. My brain stops, everything makes sense, its like a puzzle when you find the last piece.
Levi
Two unknown faces, staring into green eyes, dark clouds to bring their fear upon you.
Maddy
The sun punches the water that long ago lost its sanity, walking in is immediate suicide.
Ayana
Dark clouds merge, forming a storm, there under the surface there is not fear, but something... more serene.
Tom
The waves clash, fighting among the darkening sky, raging a constant war, but revealing a shape, a shape of fire.
Hugh
The clouds envelope the sky. Sunlight fades away as they stare deep into each others eyes, trying to predict their next move.
